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story starter: Darlene Kirkpatrick
genre: mystery
writers: Darlene Kirkpatrick
story type: story round
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"I am Jennifer Bolton." "I am Jennifer Bolton." "It will never feel right!"
"Keep repeating it!" A deep, male voice yelled from the next room.
"I am Jennifer Bolton." "Hi, I'm Jennifer."
Jennifer sighed. They had taken so much from her already, and now, they had taken away her name, her identity, her whole life. If only she knew who hired them, she'd be free.

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"Hi, I'm Jen. This is my husband, Dan."
"I like that! Let's keep it. You feel better as a Jen?" He walked in the room, one towel around his waste, another drying his dripping hair.
She barely choked out a quick "ya." He was a glorious example of what healthy living could do.
"Nice to meet you, Jen. I think I like Dan better myself. Feels better. Hi, I'm Dan. yeah. That works for me."
She nodded mutely, her eyes following every movement of his muscles as he dried his hair. It suddenly occurred to her there might be an upside to all this mess after all.


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She sat nervously on the edge of the bed and watch him pick out a shirt from the closet and slip his arms into the sleeves. Then he slowly started doing up the buttons. He looked over at her and said "Your turn. Go get your shower. Meet me in the kitchen for breakfast when your done." Then he left the room as he was tucking in his shirt.


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Jennifer sat staring at the closed door a moment to gather her racing thoughts. Everything was happening too fast! She looked regretfully at the small pile of personal things she was able to take from her home on their rush to get out. A cleansing breath later, she headed to the shower with a handful of clothes.

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"Hiya, Jen." she told her reflection in the mirror as she passed. "Nice to meet you." She teased her hair a bit. The new color was closer to her natural mouse brown than she had gotten since middleschool. The cut was pure 80s. "we really must modernize your hair, Jen." before their trip to the beauty shop yesterday, she had had long blonde hair down to her bottom. Shoulder lenghth felt wrong. She no longer looked or felt like herself, which was good because she was no longer supposed to be herself.


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Jen started the water running, then sat and inspected herself in the mirror. It would take a lot of getting used to.


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The worst was that they had taken away her makeup. She had not stepped out of her house without makeup ever as far as she could remember. It made her feel even more vonerable and naked than learning someone wanted her dead had.


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